Well stone me!

I wrote summat that contains words and a vague plot!

I would say 'please go easy on me cuz I'm a new writer and I get butthurt easily.'
But that would insinuate that I was an emotionally frail donut-puncher. Which I am not.

So I will say this instead:
Do your worst! Rip this story to shreds pointing out whatever faux-pas you can identify.
I will read and take on board any and all constructive criticism, but be warned, I may not act on it.

The story is Asylum in the Woods and it is, as I type, awaiting approval innit.