Wandering Wood is live almost · 11:58am Jul 6th, 2012
As the title says, the first two chapters of my fic are up for approval. It's slow to start, and the conflict scene of the first chapter has touches of marty stu, gary stu, whatever stu, so all I can ask is that you let it slide on the grounds of the context that took place in.
I'm still trying to find a good pace for chapter by chapter, and I'm trying to cut back on the size of my paragraphs. Typos and spelling errors can be fixed, but mostly I could use feed back on my pacing and whether or not I've got enough detail or too much... just... any pointers would be nice.