Almost all reviews/comments for my Mass Effect/40k story have one thing in common. They wanted the Inquisitor to live.
Now, that was the original plan, but as I plotted out the story, I came across two problems. One; too many characters, and two; Character redundancy. The first problem is easy enough to explain. Mass Effect already has a ton of characters, and I'm just adding more.
Hello everybody. Got a few things to say here, so bear with me. If that sounds ominous, let me reassure everyone that I am not leaving Fimfiction anytime soon.
It's safe to say that "On the Wings of Angels" is my most successful fic ever. My notifications have been flooded with faves and comments. You guys are all awesome!
Well, you have written a great story. What would you expect?
I'm not even through chapter 1 (passed the prologue though) and I already think it's epic!
Well you deserve it sir, i've found your story to be quite enthralling. I do hope that you'll be able to release the second soon.
when you write a damn good story, of course you're gonna become popular!
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Yeah, but still, I didn't write this story expecting to hit the feature box.