Preview of My First Fic · 10:11pm Jun 30th, 2012
First thing, if you're actually reading this I'm impressed. Anyway, I haven't come up with a title for my story yet so as of now it's my first fic. This is the intro which will act as the first chapter when i post it here. It might be slightly edited before i post it to the site, but this is what i'm releasing now. I have the first half of the actual first chapter done. 1-2 days and it should be up. Hope you enjoy it, criticism is encouraged.
Twilight Sparkle and Rainbow Dash have been living happily together for 3 years. They kept it secret for some time, but eventually told their friends. Rarity and Fluttershy seemed uncomfortable with the idea of two mares dating each other at first, but they soon became used to the idea. Everypony was happy for the two. Spike was especially happy because Twilight now had another pony to help out around the library, making his workload smaller and nap time longer. Of course, Twilight still spent plenty of time with the baby dragon. Nopony in Ponyville thought differently of the two for falling in love. Their relationship was what some may call ‘harmonious.’ Was. That was before that one stupid mistake made by a unicorn whom would soon come to regret every word she ever spoke.
cool looking forward to the story
PLOT DEVICE!!!
Love it so far! I see a lot of promise in your writing, considering you konw how to handle a simple intro (something many writers rush). Looking foward to it's release!
205129 I'm hoping I do. I'm trying my best, and putting a lot of effort into this. I've written short stories and such for school, and some essays. I've always done fairly well on them. This is ultimately my largest story I've ever done. I'm actually researching. I've looked up dialog usage, read a bunch of the interviews here on fimfic and did some other research. I hope it pays off and everypony enjoys it! I will attempt to get it out by tomorrow, probably later. And then it has to get approved. I have no idea how long that takes. As of now I'm 3/4 done chapter 1.
204992 Thank you! I'm looking forward to posting it! I'm having a fun time writing it.
205152 Awesome stuff! Initial publishing can take as long as a day, but it's a good feeling once it does.