Mistakes mistakes · 11:12pm Dec 26th, 2014
After some time off I have seen a bunch of errors in how I've written chapter 6, the one where Cornet's teleported to Ponyville. this being one of them: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8er83h9Bbn8 Just the stats on Rainbow's side is suffice to say that I'm a regular toad trapped in bowser's castle saying I have mario's power to get us out... Sorry for that reference but I am indeed a huge nintendo fan and have played most all the Mario games, as well as most of the Pokemon games as well. I digress though, on my video gaming knowledge of those two games. I shall rewrite chapter 6 to make it so I'm not something out of the ordinary. I am keeping the part where Cornet's in the hospital I reach "Mach 5" I believe based on those stats in the youtube video I basically belly flop into a mountain at the speed of Mach 5 or so...
That being said, I will also work on the grammar errors found through this entire piece. I've already fixed those found in chapter 1 and will, from time to time, return back to chapters I've already written to fix what grammar I can. The next chapter is the one with the Cutie mark Crusaders, they are sent by Twilight to find out my Cutie mark story and honestly when I began writing this I had no clue on the specifics on how I actually got it until I rewatched either season 1 or 2 episode 23 where the mane 6 tells them their story.
Finally I wish to leave off that I'll be enjoying my winter vacation off of school and might not be posting anything until after January 7th where my two friends and editors can get together to help what grammar they can. you'll receive the Christmas Intermission before I return to consult with my editors on what to do with chapters previous.
Many thanks for the criticism as well as the dislikes with those I realize my mistakes but on top of that I would like to possibly boost my likes if at all possible by now,
Storm Rival.
