Follow up

As I read in my comments it seems my spelling is way of. I plan to fix this in the future. I'm gonna have my friend and a couple of others read it before I put another one up.. Some say the concept is unoriginal. Well that maybe so but the fics I have read are not told. I have only read
My Little Dashie
Cupcakes
Silent Ponyville
The Promises we keep
The Hero of time in Equestria
And Human.
Even though I have a bunch of fics on my read later i haven't actually read them yet. So to me the concept was original. If somepony else did do there's like mine I am unaware of this.
I will continue with this story and keep telling it as it is.

Thanks to all that reads this
Bright Star

Comments

[The Producer]

The thing is that there's a wide wide world of fics that aren't as mainstreamed as those.

And OC pony being born into the world from a brony?

It's been done loads of times. And the fact that there's almost no streamlined stories like this tells you that it's not a very smiled on subject.

Self inserts also aren't smiled upon because they get into the realm of wish-fulfillment very, very easily. What authors do is basically make their characters Gary Stu's, and make them shag their pony of focus.

And that's not entertaining or fun to read at all without a buildup.