the 2nd chapter thts up right now is a unedited version. the real version will be up soon.

ch 2 is done. Just need my friends to over read it and fix the wrongs so I don't have a Ch 1 incident again

well im starting ch 2.
been thinking of things to add to it. making sure i got some people to edit it for me.
hopefully better then my last

As I read in my comments it seems my spelling is way of. I plan to fix this in the future. I'm gonna have my friend and a couple of others read it before I put another one up.. Some say the concept is unoriginal. Well that maybe so but the fics I have read are not told. I have only read
My Little Dashie
Cupcakes
Silent Ponyville
The Promises we keep
The Hero of time in Equestria
And Human.

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To any who are following me I posted my first story. Technically my 2nd but the one I started was no good. My thanks to Danny J for helping me on that. Just waiting for the mods to look at it now.

Well that's all
UPDATE Mods accepted it