Darkness Awaits Cancelled · 5:57pm Nov 24th, 2014
Hi everybody...
Sooo... sorry for the letdown, but I'm actually working on another story that takes priority. Plus, i didn't really like the way this was going. Blue's character was all wrong, it was way too positive and the plot could've turned out ok, but... It wasn't great.
I'm thinking of changing Blue's backstory as well. Growing up in Ponyville is way too cliche and there's a bunch of other aspects i'm really not pleased with.
Since i have a few more chapters written down on paper, i may edit and post them one day. I may not. All depends on... something.
Also, a big, big sorry to the respectful owners of Paper Sketcher, Reflected Lightning, Lightening Cookie and Aurora Stargaze! Your OC's were going to play some major roles in the story, so i'm sorry for cancelling.
Gee, I've got a lot of apologies here.
Sorry! (again),
~Nightyarn
Well it may be cliche but with how the town is she'd end up there eventually. The town just attracts all the crazies. Maybe go with Hollow Shades as where she was before heading to pponyville? Everytime I see that place in stories it is an origin of creepiness.
That's a shame, but if you don't feel like your story is sticking together, it's okay if you cancel it. If you want some help in anything just write to me
2613986 Isn't that where the bat ponies live? That could work...
2614024 Thanks! I may redo is sometime, but skip the foal part and do her as an adult... Who knows? A fellow commenter has certainly given me ideas... *rubs hands together schemingly.*