immortal saiyan in equestria · 5:32pm Nov 23rd, 2014
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/231207/immortal-saiyan-in-equestria
immortal saiyan in equestria is a crossover with the dragon ball z series that stars another saiyan who escaped planet vegeta before it exploded. My goal for length is about 30 chapters minimum. This is my first story and i'm new to writing so its not as good as i believe it can be. This story will contain adventure, dark, romance, comedy, alternate universe, and gore. If anyone could proofread my story and help me that be awesome.
Capitalization, you know it exist. Right?