Surrender or Death Update! · 1:09pm Nov 4th, 2014
I do not know if someone have noticed, but I got a wonderful proofreader (mikemeiers) and updated the new version of the prologue and the first chapter, now with grammar a lot better! :D
I am correcting and translating the next chapter, then mikemeiers will proofread it and I will finally post it! I think in about two weeks I will be able to post the next chapter. In this new chapter we will see more about Twilight emotions about everything (specially the deaths) and how all the war, the deaths and the possibility of killing any of her friends are affecting her. And we will see a little more about Spike soon!