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Aedina


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  • 603 weeks
    Frustration vs. Patience

    Well, it's been months since my last chapter. Sorry folks. Between Writers Block and some very pernicious and unpleasant health problems I don't see the circumstances changing anytime soon. I am still working on this, with every intent to finish it...if nothing else I want to see how it turns out, as I'm letting the story lead me at this point. Oh, I have some ideas about where it's going,

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  • 623 weeks
    Edit Addendum

    As stated in my last post, I wasn't happen with the ending of the last chapter and had decided act on suggestions received in regards to making it more powerful. Hopefully I succeeded. Anyhow, feedback is welcome.

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  • 623 weeks
    The Cliff Ender That Wasn't

    After reading my latest chapter to Chatoyance aloud both she and I were unhappy with the way I ended it. Her suggestions and advice have got wheels turning in my noggin', and I hope to have an editorial addendum to "Battlestations" if all goes well. I hadn't meant to leave things hanging, and to do so in an uninteresting and non-suspenseful way at that. Just the mark of my lack of

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  • 626 weeks
    The Second Chapter - Writer's Block

    I've always said that I can tell when I'm challenging myself to something really important in my life - it's when I'm feeling terrified. That's how I feel about this story. I know with my intellect that there's nothing to be scared of - it's just that I've tried and failed in the past to write anything longer than a poem. The response to my first chapter was encouraging and kind, thank you.

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  • 631 weeks
    A Plea To Hasbro, Inc.

    My fellow Bronies,

    I have taken the time to write a letter to Hasbro, in regards to there being so few quality collectable products available on the commercial market. If you feel the way I do, I ask you to take a moment, and do the same. Maybe if we inundate the Marketing Department with these, we might get something worth while before the "trend" has passed us by.

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Jan
3rd
2012

A Poem Inspired by A Taste of Grass, by Chatoyance - and dedicated to Her · 3:04pm Jan 3rd, 2012

Being a long time Ren Geek (31 years and counting) I couldn't help but associate a little with Ren, in this story. Here's what my idea was of what he'd perhaps write. For those unfamiliar with Elizabethan/Shakespearean language: the words ending in 'd are pronounced like they would regularly be pronounced today, but are spelled differently because, back then, words ending in ed were pronounced as if there were another syllable there. The term Mores = Morals, the way of doing things, etc. Ken = those of the same kind, a little different from Kin, which are those that are directly related by blood.



Upon four hooves, I sweet grass tread
Where once was devastation
And flowered meadows, verdant, spread
Across my new-found Nation

The bubble gate, which open’d doors
Of hope, long cast aside
Dismiss’d away all human mores
And vanquished human pride

A new beginning, second chance
Was gifted to my ken
Compassion for our circumstance:
The plight of mortal men

And those who had the sight to view
Beyond all compass’d fear
Traverse’d the dangers to pursue
The better life found here

Equestria, the Fairest Realm;
Where dwells no earthly pain ~
Our Princesses are at its Helm
May They, forever, reign

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sphotos-b.xx.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ash4/483375_578144502215007_1987089762_n.jpg I simply couldn't resist sharing this, it's just too darn funny.

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