New Stuff · 1:01am Sep 22nd, 2014
Hey guys, it has been awhile since I've done anything with my stories, I know. Um....I do have excuses for why I haven't done much, but I'm not sure if I want to write that out. So.....here's what I'm going to tell y'all: For awhile now, I've been working on a story called "Snow." This story is something I'm trying new. This story is literally a mix between death and depression. Literally. Although, that's not what's entirely new. I tagged the story "Alternative Universe" because I changed from what actually happens in the MLP universe and the version I made. Nothing huge, but pretty noticeable to everyone. There will be death, but not the way you'd expect it from me. Kinda like my previous gore story with Derpy, but not a lot of gore. I'm hoping to pass without that stupid gore tag. I honestly believe if I put that gore tag in it, a lot of people won't give the story a chance. Even my normal couple 100s or so. I want everyone to give it a chance because I've been working on this damn story ever since the 26th of August. So almost a month. I'm not even halfway done! This story will also be a one-shot. I've also tried a new style on how the pages will look. I also hope to pass with a "Teen" rating too, but I think that might not happen because I'm literally cutting the boundaries of cussing. Um....since I've talked this much already, I'll give you guys a bite or two of what I've put. Let me know if you guys think that sample should be good enough for everyone to try? Thank you for your time and I'll get back to work.
"Hello, little filly. We saw you sitting by your lonesome and thought you could use some company." Bucky said.
"I-I'm not a filly. I'm a colt." Film's ears flattened against his head.
Bucky stood up from his seat and leaned over the table, Film cowered in his gaze. "What did you say to me you little slut?"
"As you can see, the police were dispatched last night when numerous reports called in saying that they heard screaming. Police walked up to the scene to find a young stallion in his mid-twenties hanging from one of the street lights upside down and all of his-"
The TV turned off. Film turned to see his mother with a remote in her hoof. "Come on, Film. Your gonna be late for the bus, sweetie." She said.
She slowly nodded her head. "It's..... Fluttershy." She whispered, quietly.
Even though she kept quiet, Film still heard her. "Hi Fluttershy. I'm Film Maker." He extended a hoof to her, but she stared at it. Unsure if she should shake it or not. Though it made Film a bit uncomfortable, he kept his hoof out until she would shake it. Eventually, she grasped his hoof and gave it a light shake.
There's your bites. Lemme know what ya think, please. Thanks!
