New and Improved Chapter One

Thank you to everypony who commented on the mistakes from chapter in Applejack Pie. I have now re-uploaded a critiqued chapter one. It is still the same chapter as before just with out all the mistakes. I just wanted to say thank you to everyone who commented, liked or favorited this story. I promise to try my best to make a great read for you all. :)

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On another I am pointing out Chapter Two will be uploaded sometime early next week or even by the end of this weekend. I am going to try to post a chapter twice or once a week. So keep updated.

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I also have plans on making my first huge adventure story. I have basically the whole story planned out. The closer I get to publishing it. I will let you guys in some hints about the story :)

Regards
Gleaming Ember