new story!

hey all, had a new idea for a story that I began to write, though im still working on the first page now, though if any of you want to help out, I do need some spell check people to make the appropriate edits so there isn't any mistakes. if you wana help, just send me a pm and when I have time, ill send you a chunk of the chapter I have written for you to look over. criticizem encouraged when reading it.