To help improve my diction and syntax, I have decided to create a little project that might interest you fellas. Being from a southern family, I know the roundabouts when it comes to that sort of "hick" lifestyle. So the project that I have decided to create is a day-to-day description of Applebloom's life. Depending on how popular it is, of course. I will still try to work on DEAD
Heh, I suppose that cancelled wasn't the right thing to do. I should actually try to pump out a chapter today. You may see it within an hour or two, but it really depends on how fast I type. I aim to edit my writing style from "tell" to "show" and you may see more detail. I was overall upset about my writing style and I couldn't figure any actual plan, but now I have an endgame for the story.
I'm afraid I cannot be your editor, however, like the two authors I've proofread for in the past, you have more talent than you think. You might not even need an editor. However, if you feel you need one, that's your choice, and I shall not stop you from making it.
Sorry, cant be of any help in that area.
Though there are many others willing.
I can offer my editing services. You've got a nice concept there, I'd love to help. PM if you're interested.
I'll edit for you if you'd like. PM me if you're interested
I'm afraid I cannot be your editor, however, like the two authors I've proofread for in the past, you have more talent than you think. You might not even need an editor. However, if you feel you need one, that's your choice, and I shall not stop you from making it.
Have a good day.