My new story (and my first)

Am writing right know my little fluttershy it's based on my dog that i had skipper a true story btw not from the movie my dog skip i name her after that dog.

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[Honeytongue]

Now I haven't read your story yet, but seeing the title and the cover art alone, I can kinda understand why a number of people are giving it a down vote. Perhaps a less obvious/ more creative or original title might have helped.