New story ahead

Hello again ! I plan to have the first chapter done by tonight, anyway here's a little exert form the story. Do you like it ? do you hate it ? leave me a comment and I'll take your opinion respectfully.

Percy starred at the mangled disfigured corpse of a stallion imagining a thousand different ways that he could be killed, how was killed. Torn open jaw dangling around like a bell, the stomach sprawled out on the dirty ground must of been dead for days. The trash and surrounding darkness only cemented the connection between the two. Percy could stare at a body for hours, studying it and imagining what had happened to this pony and why ? A half decayed bulging eyes greeted Percy like a friend would.

'' Hey Percy how ya doing '' He could he imagine it saying to himself.

'' Percy . . .'' A hoof landed on his shoulder taking him out of the stallion's mind and back into the real world.

'' Sorry Rusty, I was just determining the cause of death I say dead for about two or three days the area is wiped clean were dealing with a professional ''. Percy rubbed his face and got up looking over the shallow streets of Applewood.

''' This could be the guy from a few weeks back with that mare, same cuts, same . . .jaw placement and the color too black as night. Percy put on his red tinted glasses and looked over the body again.