Polishing and Expanding

Alright, welp, now that I finally got my first ever Fanfic started, I'm going to have to start really committing to it, heh. Anywho, I took some initial feedback on a bunch of my grammar and a few other strange inconsistencies I spotted throughout the first chapter and give the entire thing a polish, so hopefully it's a lot cleaner now.

Now that I feel like I can quit fussing with the first Chapter, I should be getting to work on Chapter 2 and up very soon. Chances are I'll only get up to Chapter 3 until I figure out where else to take this story. I clearly have some big ideas for it in mind already, so hopefully I can be able to work it out very soon. I really hope some of you early readers are enjoying it, cuz I sure am! I hope to get more chapters out to you all very soon.

Thanks for reading everypony!