Jun
7th
2014
OC Story Showdown in the future. · 3:27am Jun 7th, 2014
Crimson Crown of the Imperial Empire vs. Death Strike of the Lennex Empire.
Both are Emperors.
Both have battle experience
Both will do what they can to achieve victory
Major difference
Crimson helps others when able, while Death prefers to make others suffer.
Who will win in their ultimate showdown, only Panzerbrony, The Lone Swordsman, and I know, and we won't be telling.
And yes, I know I messed up on spelling with this.
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Darth Redbeard · 174 views
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2219883 don't judge a book by it's cover.
2220416 Even if they're not overpowered? I'm making Crimson more like a regular one. Check out the recent blog I did, and it will tell you most things about him. He did not have everything handed to him on a silver platter. That much I can tell you.
2220433 I'm undertaking a big task, which is to break the Alicorn OC curse. And this story about mine, is the one I'm going to use for it.
2220445 I can at least try. I could send you a link to where it's at right now, and let you decide if this story will be a doom or success.
2220469 alright. At this exact moment however, it's under heavy construction, so it might seem a bit weird.
Here you go.
2220502 Like I said, needs a lot of work. I really have not much of a proofreader or editor this time. The ones that did look, have not got back to me fully. And I want to get this out, before Panzerbrony get's his finished. My story is what leads up to his. mine and someone else's.
2220502 you also notice, I gave away a villain in this story, just with his name?
2220709 thanks. I made a small change to what you gave me from my story. Now you'll be able to tell who's doing the talking.