A preview of two new fics I'm working on! · 12:58pm Jun 3rd, 2014

I have been working on a couple of fics in secret recently, and these are small chunks of the ideas I've been working on:

First is from a story titled "Pregnant Shimmer" (Working Title):

Sunset looked up at her husband, tears in her eyes, one of the only times she was legitimately scared. Sunset was one of those tough girls, but this. This was terrifying.
She was having a baby, and it was starting to set it what this all meant.
"W-What if I'm not ready?" Sunset asked through tears.
"No one is ever ready, it's a learn-as-you-go kind of deal, but I will be here every step of the way, and so will the girls, and...I'm sure we can pull that Twilight girl out of her pony world if need be." Replied her husband with a smile.
"Yes, cause I really want Twilight to explain pregnancy to me..." Sunset said sarcastically.
Brandon chuckled and kisses his flame-haired wife on the forehead. "You know what I mean."
Sunset smiled a bit "Yeah...Thanks, honey. But, I dunno. Am I really going to make a decent mother?" She asked with concern
"I think you'll make a fine mom, don't believe me? Let's ask the girls." Replied Brandon.

There is supposed to be more comedy to it as well as the sappy moments, and yes, it's self-insert, don't like it? then fuck off. I give zero fucks.

Second is from a story called "Let The Rainbow Remind You."

Rainbow Dash read through an archive of old posts I made on brony sites and stuff from before the fandom died. Dunno where she found them, but she took it upon herself to interrogate me about it when I got home. I walked in the door, grabbed my soda and plopped down on the couch, flipping through channels on the TV when I heard her trot into the room.
"So...What happened?" She asked with concern.
I looked over at my once favorite pony and gave a look of indifference. "What do you mean, what happened?"
"What happened to you? You used to be so happy. You loved ponies...You...Loved me...Now, you're just angry and bitter at everyone, including me." Rainbow Dash said somberly, looking down and to the side "Why couldn't I have met the happy you? The one who cared about people...Or ponies. Other than himself? I'm here and you don't seem to be much happier."
I looked over with a raised brow "Were you sent here to cheer me up? Guilt trip me? Make me feel bad? Or what?"
Rainbow shook her head "No. I wasn't sent here on purpose, it was an accident, but still. I wanna know what happened. Part of my job is to make friends, and I consider you a friend."
Deep down I was dying inside, this should have been the greatest thing ever, but I was too caught up in my selfishness to even care that a character I loved so dearly was real and standing in front of me. I Say at the edge of my couch and looked down.
"Life happened. I was kicked out of my country, my home, the place I dreamt about for years, my fiancee was killed and I guess I just stopped caring..." I sighed and looked at the rainbow pegasus.
"Don't think for a second that you being here hasn't made me happier, I...I..." I paused to fight back tears "I'm just so afraid of losing you, like I did the rest of my friends and people I cared about. Or that I'll wake up and find out this was all a dream, I can't take that kind of loss again."
Rainbow Dash walked over and placed a hoof on my knee, it felt real, I still couldn't believe it, it was like a real pony hoof. She looked up at me sadly "I'm sorry about your home, and your fiancee, but I wanna help...If you'll let me."
I reached my arms around and embraced the spectral pony in a hug, for the first time in years I felt happy...She was so warm, and soft, it was nothing like those old fanfics made me imagine it, but it was wonderful.
I lost so much. But at least...At least I had Rainbow Dash.

Note: These stories are subject to change, but these are small parts of stories I'm working on. Tell me what y'all think.

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