Considering renaming Dark Horizons · 7:02pm May 28th, 2012
As one of my prereaders has been kind enough to mention, it appears that the title of my current story is already taken. To make my story more notable, I am considering changing the name to something that appears to be unique with the next chapter update. How does "In the Land of Twilight" sound?
Also, I am a bit sad that my story has so few comments. I don't know if you guys know, but I read all my comments, and I love feedback. I'm happily surprised that I've received nothing but positive votes so far, but simply getting those votes isn't as important as knowing my dear readers' thoughts.
That about sums it up for now. I'm going to try to write the second chapter up as soon as I settle on a perspective for it, and deal with a few other personal projects.
If your going to have Twilight having some meaningful interactions with her subconcious in her dreams, then I love the title. If I may be so bold as to give a suggestion though? "The Land of Twilit Dreams".It's not that much different, but I just thought it would be worth mentioning her mind or her subconscious if we're diving into her sanity...
140246 The focus isn't so much on sanity, though it will play a part. If you want spoilers like the ones I gave another prereader, than PM me and I'll spill, if you promise to keep it quiet.
And thank you for the suggestion. I like it.
140278 I can promise to try
140292 works for me. Send it and I'll drop you the summary by midnight. Also, I have no shame in asking for any advertisement I can get. This poor thing got allowed at midnight so it missed the mainscreen. It's only got 26 views and that probably includes me.
140320 Hm... I'll see if I can't get you another viewer or two.
140322 Oh Sheep I forgot to send you that summary! Just a minute...
I haven't read your story, but to chime in on the title, In the Land of Twilight is almost as referential as Dark Horizons.
Namely the .hack franchise, specifically this song.
(Actually, judging from ancillary indications of the tone of your story, this song may be appropriate.)
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145383 Ah yeah, I have the song bookmarked, but I didn't pick the name with any thought to it. Hmm... maybe something between the two.