May
14th
2014
Ode to the Down Thumb · 2:53am May 14th, 2014
Oh person who thumbed down my work, to you what did i wrong?
Was my humor so unhumorous? Did i turn a phrase too long?
If only you would of criticized, and told me and told me where i erred
To of have improved my delivery, my feelings need not be spared.
What did i do to earn your ire, I fear i shall never know.
Oh person who my efforts, submerged.
Who are you? And where did you go?
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AimlessPone · 415 views
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Hearing people liking your fic can be like drinking a liquid hug.
But i saw people who didn't like it and thumb it down, and i can't help but wonder what it was exactly that they didn't like. Was is a nuance of writing or style? Did they not like how i portrayed a character. Did they feel a character was to far away from the original works that is drawn upon? Was it a single aspect that threw them off or the work as a whole. You can't make everyone happy even most of the time, but I got to wondering and a short poem-thingy happened.
"Have" not "Of."
I'm sure you're sick of seeing all the comments about it, so I just had to take the cheap jab.
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You shall be receiving no cookies.
PS: First few pages of chapter 4 have been pretty heavily edited already. Dunno who the other guy is, though.
2116355 Might be multiple people
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