I've finished planning and started writing again

the title says it all except, the first scene isn't even mentioned in the plan is already over 1K, this is gonna be a nice (hopefully) long chapter. and just for the record since none of you gave a name for derpy if that wasn't her name i had to go with my own creation: Bubbling Muffin. You could have stopped the horror but you didn't, I am at all times willing to take suggestions so that this monstrosity doesn't have to be included, so it's just if Derpy Hooves/Ditzy Doo wasn't her real name, what would be (cannot include to do with her disability or mental thingy)