Synthetic Sequel · 8:43pm Mar 18th, 2014
It wasn't the most popular of stories, but I've been thinking of ways to continue the story, as well as further explain things that weren't properly explained before, such as why Twilight created an entirely new dimension for the cloning process. I was just wondering if any of you would even be interested in reading it. I realize the first was very macabre, and the second will be no different most likely; however, I plan to delve more into the science fiction side of things. I'm thoroughly interested in the science behind Equestrian magic, and I have some ideas I'd like to convey in this sequel. I'd also like to focus a bit more on what's going on in Twilight's mind, contrary to the original story which was shown primarily through the eyes of Scootaloo in the way that my presence as narrator didn't allow readers insight into the mind of more than one pony at a time. This, I don't intend to change, but I'd like to have at least a scene shown through Twilight's perspective. She's broken, and I think that would make for a very interesting world view.
oh, I would love if you continued it, the way you are talking about continuing it make it sound good, I'd deffently read, and seeing the world through a broken twilight's eye's sound's fun.
1936184 Well, at least I'd be making one of my readers happy. Lol.
I'd not mind editing it; I'm already doing that for several stories, but it's slow lately. I loved the original... Even if it was slightly terrifying. Actually, scratch that, Twi's reaction freaked me the fuck out until I read the comments and learned that the new RD didn't have any soul, so no emotions, and it couldn't be fixed with the memory spell.
tl;dr Dibs on editor position!
1936470 Wait, so you didn't read it all the way through?
No thanks, btw. I edit for other people as well, so I proofread my own stories.
1936495 No, I read the whole thing. I just didn't get what you meant by "soul".
Also, awwww, I wanted early access.
1936497 Ah ha! An ulterior motive!
What else would I mean by soul?
1936509 Wait, that WASN'T internal dialogue? Ooops...
I've heard it used to mean many things, like:
- consciousness
- personality
- happiness
- memories
- the subconscious
- the bottom of a sh- Wait, no, wrong soul.
- that bit which goes to heaven or hell when you die
- the bit that wanders around on Earth when you die
- something evil people don't have
1936558 Well, when I think of a soul, I think of all those things combined, and that's what I meant in the story.
1936767 Lol
But if you end up wanting an editor (Another set of eyes helps, I've found) message me. Pleeeeaaaase?
1936947 Lol. I'll think about it.
1937069 Yay!