Cancelled Story · 10:21pm Jan 26th, 2014
I've decided to not create a story I was writing. I fell out of love with it, but I really like the first scene I wrote for it. Therefore, I'm posting that short scene right here. Enjoy.
The day started off fairly normally for Rarity. She awoke to the sound of birds chirping in the tree by her second story window, the light of the sun, and the smell of Sweetie Belle burning...cereal? Sadly enough, that was a common occurence in the household. Rarity sighed as she hopped up out of her bed. She stretched and gave a cute little yawn before prancing downstairs. There, the smoke had begun to fill the rooms. Rarity calmly used her magic to open all the doors and windows and clear the smoke. She levitated the small fire extinguisher from the kitchen wall in her magical grip and sprayed it at a small, plastic cereal bowl which had somehow managed to start spitting out a three hoof flame. "I swear, Sweetie," Rarity commented exhaustedly, "You seem to summon those flames from the pits of Tartarus!"
"Thanks," Sweetie Belle responded, unnaturally chipper, "Maybe I'll get my cutie mark in dark magic!" She cocked her head to the side a little and gave a toothy grin, eyes closed.
"Eeeee," Rarity slowly backed out of the kitchen and only turned around when Sweetie was out of sight.
For the love of Luna write that make it into some sort of story grim dark or comedy I don't care but you must make this
It was originally the beginning of a story in which Rarity uses Zecora's voodoo dolls to ship ponies in ponyville, but I decided I'm not that good at comedy, and I would need some serious help in writing it, especially Zecora's part. I knew I couldn't do it and make it as good as I imagine it, and I didn't want to half ass it either.
1774726 I meant to reply, not just comment. lol.
1774761 Ok but you could make a different story from that like sweetie belle becomes evil and its up to rarity to save her friends from sweetie
1775667 Lol. I feel you are in danger of plageurism of Evil Belle already. xD
1776258 Really?! I haven't even read that yet lol
1776273 It's comedy, but it's extremely cute. She gets ahold of the alicorn amulet. xD If you look at my favorites, you'll find it.
1776296 Aku is a good writer but in this story who says she gets the alicorn amulet and who says no one dies
1776319 Ah. True. Lol. I'll think on it and see what I can do. Lol. I really like that scene, myself.
1776386 Hooray I gave some one a story idea ps did you ever read my fic if so how was it
1776395 Not yet. xD I took a nap. Work has been hell lately. I'll go read it right now.