Major Editing · 3:25pm Jan 24th, 2014
A few days ago, I asked for a review on my current project "Moon Fall". After a few days, I find that my review had been posted, and was rather disappointed to find that I had scored much lower than I had expected to. The review can be found here.
So after retreading that review multiple times, I have been pondering many ideas to improve it, particularly to fix the things he pointed out, so I am here to announce that I will be heavily editing the chapters. No changes to the core plot of the story will be made, however, I will be putting special emphasis on the emotional parts of the story.
You won't have to go back and read the story again, but for those who have only progressed one or two chapters, know that the best is yet to come.
A special thanks to Spit Flame for giving me his unadulterated opinion on my story, without his review, I wouldn't have had the plethora of new ideas that I did. Thank you all for reading,
Edits completed:
- New section added to Fallen Apples
-Delta
