I need your help my dear friends · 4:45am Jan 9th, 2014
I have found my self in complete inspiration to write this awesome story. I would like an Editor who can not only help me make the grammar exceptional, but also make the story smooth and great!
What story you say? Well, this is a story that hit me like a ton of bricks and I plan on giving my best effort into it! So that means I need an editor, as well as custom art work to... though that can come later for when the story is ready to be released!
So now on to the story, so this is the first draft of the long description, and I am not satisfied with it so it will not be the final cut, but it is enough to give you guys the information of what you need.
Puppet's Shadow
Thorn, a stallion, even an unicorn. Lost his family to a fatal mistake, a mistake in which the hierarchy of Canterlot were at fault for. Set on destroying the princesses and all who adore them. In order to bring out a new era of sovereignty, Thorn finds himself creating a puppet out of his own body in order to create a pure heart. The key ingredient needed within to achieve the key to his agenda, the Pulmaira stone. When a greater threat then himself arises though, what side will he take? Will he be willing to expose his cover in order to save the ponies he has come to hate or is Thorn doomed to assist in the annihilation of Equestria?
It will have the following tags to the story: Romance, Tragedy, Dark, Adventure, AU.
There is so much more to the story, I can not even explain on how exited I am to work on it! So if you are willing to help with anything at all, whether it be Editing, Pre-Reading, or even Art Work! I will be pleased either way!
Thanks for you time
Mr. Flare
That sounds like a great story line! Should be pretty epic! I wish I could help. :(
Just out of idle curiosity, what does Thorn look like? Colour, mane colour, eye colour etc.
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Gray coat, Red mane and well, I am trying to find a way to post a picture of him..... His cutie mark is just a simple stone, since he originated from the Crystal Empire. One of his downfalls is that he was never happy after all the King Sambra stuff,
so He never got his crystal coat back.He never had a crystal coat.