I Dream to Fly :Update One: · 12:54am May 8th, 2012
Chapter two is almost finished, it just needs proofread and It's ready to go. The title of the new chapter is, Crusader Support. I'm going to give you some original paragraphs from the chapter. Not going to give too much information out, but the title says it all basically.
Sample 1: “I’ve shown Applebloom already, so I might as well show you too Scootaloo.” Scootaloo looked slightly confused and glanced over at Applebloom, who was too focused too much on Sweetie to notice. Sweetie Belle just pointed at her horn and shut her eyes.
Sample 2: “Yeah, I did earn a great deal of bits from helping Celestia, just less of one thousand bits in total. Something close to that anyway. Twilight should be down soon, she is just up in her bedroom.” One thousand bits was a lot to have earned from doing some work for Celestia, although slightly not surprising. Spike was working with the most royal of all ponies after all.
Scootaloo read over the papers, not noticing Twilight trotting down the stairs and moving over to the little filly. “One week of work… Celestia herself… Events” She nodded her head after reading the small print of paper that looked to be a report, probably for Twilight.
With that said, you can expect the next chapter out within the next couple days, maybe tomorrow, maybe Wednesday, who knows? But, love you all and I hope you all enjoy this story for what it is. I'm expecting the people who read my first story, to notice some stuff in this story, and I'm going to feel smart adding this "stuff" in.