The Outlander's Cure complete? Yes(warning, finish Cure before reading)

Yes I completed the Outlanders Cure. Originally meant to be about 3 or 4 chapoters but I feel this works just as well. Scootaloo has learned what I needed her to and I didn't want to do writing about the near week it takes him to return to Equestria. Yes there was a My Chemical Romance: Danger Days reference for any fans of thier music. I personally cried towards the end and when Scoots' had to learn her lesson. I'll move onto the next pony that learns thier lesson(Most likeley Bow) and Breach is just kind of learning lessons as it goes along. I'm sorry for making 'Cure' so short but I couldn't see it lasting to long anyway. Hope you guys enjoyed it. Love hearing non troll feedback. And yes i do know that my typed grammar sucks. Its good in my head but I think faster than I type so.
I'm also working on some artwork for the Character's and Scoots cutie mark. Bow and Breach probably won't get cutie marks due to being outlander and daemon respectively (only so many ways to show murder or bacstabbing so I decided outlanders don't have cutie marks.)

Oh yeah, and I got a question about ages of certain characters.
Bow is roughly 19-22 ish being that she made the comment of escaping from the outlander at "what eqautes to high school graduation"
Breach is an immortal up until the deal with the anchient one. He is now about 23-25 ish.
I've placed Scoot's age at about 15-17, which is why they note that she is nearly a young mare. I need her to be older for a later story, other wise I'd have put her at 14-16.
The Mane Six are all about 25-28.
Baener was about 45 or so with Siobhan being about 42. They did have a foal, a young filly about 3 months old.
The unamed faol of Breach and Bow is obviously a newborn.