On revisions · 2:36am Dec 19th, 2013
Due to critique on my story, I am currently in the process of "Dinosaur" revisions, i.e. I have printed off the first few chapters and am picking through them by hand to improve the overall feel of my story.
Thanks to the people who have been straight with me and tore into my errors like a steak. Especially TrampingPony, who really gave me an honest critque when I needed it