Changes for for Black Rain Chapter 6.

Okay, it looks like Chapter 7 may be longer than expected (currently 14k+ words, with about... 20%? more to go). Sorry...

Anyway, in the process of writing Chapter 7, I discovered that a small section near the beginning (about 1k words) might work better if its moved to the end of Chapter 6 (which, on re-reading, felt like a somewhat weak ending).

So I move it there.

If you just want to read from the changed part, search for the the word [Added] (with the square bracket, it was a white text so you'll only see it if you highlight it), and start from there.

Thank you for your interest in this story, I hope this small addition will tide you over until I'm done with Chapter 7.