Handwriting Practice Story

My mom wants me to get better and editing and my handwriting. So i made a deal with her, if i can make a pony story not using the computer till its done. She said ok so hrees the idea:

This is Omega hes a changeling , but every changeling as a true form and a pony form. And once you find yours its like getting your cutie mark. Anyways that is hes pony form. His mother, the queen sent him to feed but he fell in love with Rarity. He cant tell his mother or shell make him or herself feed on her.