Everfree-Notes episode 1 · 10:10pm Apr 17th, 2012
First episode- Parasprite invasion.
Cast.
Solrac-pending, waiting for yaplap's permission. But if I get a great idea for his role I'm simply going to go with it. got one, he's the frat boy party dude counter part of pinkie pie.
Princess Luna-in her canterlot voice.
Trixie-this Trixie is after Boast Busters. Her desire to be Princess Luna's Pupil is to show up Twilight sparkle.
Gilda the griffin-The post Griffin the brush off Gilda. Upset over losing rainbow dash as her only friend.
CeresBane: the atheist pony that doesn't bow down to any god or demon unless they do him a favour first. Even goes so far as to challenge gods to single combat. As the MLP universe isn't so obcessed with violence. He is seen as quite insane. 1. to challenge things better than him 2. to be so quick to want to attack things. this episode he is a samurai.
event log
-Princess Luna has scheduled to visit Everfree
-The great and powerful Trixie brags about how she will impress her to such an extent that the Princess will personally make her her pupil. No one believes her and as usual see her as just being showy (again).
-Solrac is shouting things-possibility responsible for the preparations, since no one else can be bothered to actually be in charge.
-at early evening great wings darken the moon as a sillouette of a flying creature over shadows everfree.
-Ponies thinking it is princess Luna they all panic to make a haphazard welcome.
-someone mentions that isn't it a bit early for her to arrive?
-Princess Luna arrives followed unbeknownst to her by a horde of cute and cuddly parasprites.
-Gilda just so happens to love parasprites and happens to be a delicacy among griffins.
-however she cannot eat them all as twice more spring up as she eats them.
-solrac carries a boombox with the music pinkie pie used to get rid of parasprites.
-he leaves the boom box in the middle of the forest. and goes "problem solved"
-Luna but won't they come back after they get bored of the music?
-an explosion flares up into the dark forest. "like I said problem solved"
-the dark forest begins to gain an orange glow and slowly begins to surround the town. the sky is black with smoke, as pegasii fall from the skies in their vain attampt to fly away.
-Pony-you call this solved? now the whole town will go up in smoke!
-solrac: not if we burn first.
-Trixie: have no fear. trixie is here.
-sarcastic yay.
-she does something useless.
-princess Luna steps up and says something heroic.
-she uses her horn with all her might to summon some sort of magic.
-for a long while nothing happens.
-they all complain.
-luna is calm and tells them to wait.
-the ground rumbles.
-distant sound of rushing water.
-a tidal wave goes through the forest.
-and the town.
- and all sorts of dangerous creatures come out into the night
oh crap! forgot one major event- the sillouette was gilda arriving.
then luna arrives after.
But yeah, I do dark and cynical quite well, it comes naturally to me its what I find funny. I love watching MLP and putting dark side notes that no one ever considers
e.g. the parasprites. they just went away in the ending.
trixie was left in disgrace. a lesson had to be learned at her expense. but clearly it just her inferiority complex screaming a cry for help.
and gilda. sure she was being a bitch but being shunned out of town like that was even more of a dick move.
I will need a few more characters to flesh out this story though and I suspect this chapter is gonna go 10k easy.
"GET THOSE KEGS OF CIDER READY THEY'LL BE REALLY IMPORTANT FOR THE PARTY AND NOT THAT PISS THE APPLE FAMILY CALLS CIDER BUT IS ACTUALLY APPLE JUICE. THE GOOD PROPER STUFF.""
"WHERES THE VODKA, GIN AND RUM!? I WANT EVERY DRINK SPIKED WITH THE STUFF"
"SUPPOSING SHE'S ROYALTY I GUESS SHE'LL BE WANTING WINE TOO! GET THE GOOD STUFF, THE CRAP BY STINKY PUPPU. YOU KNOW THE FANCY GUY"
"I don't get it, why do we need so much booze? You're driving the town into debt buying all this bootleg stuff"-alcohol is illegal, it is now canon.
"YOU IDIOT! YOU THINK A PARTY IS MADE WITH BALLOONS AND STREAMER AND BUCKING CAKE? THE CAKE IS A LIE MAN. PARTIES ARE MADE BY BOOZE. PEOPLE GETTING BUCKED OFF THEIR FACES AND START DOING STUPID HILARIOUS SHIT! THEN WE RECORD IT AND SHOW IT ON PONYTUBE FOR ALL TO SEE ALL THE WHILE LAUGHING OUR ASSES OFF ALL THROUGH THE NIGHT"
"I GOT BIG PLANS TONIGHT. BECAUSE TONIGHT I'M GOING TO... PRINCESS LUNA... INTO A MAN"
"you're going to make princess luna into-?"
"I KNOW WHAT I SAID!"
princess luna and solrac shout at each other.
ponyville ponies hesitate to enter the everfree forest because its trespassing in everfree territory. they hate to mention this rivalry so they teach the children that its full of dangerous creatures and monsters
Hmm... looks promising. Should you desire, I'll be open for pre-reading/ reviewing. Mind, it's close to the end of the school year so everyone/everypony is busy so that'll be delayed but I'm always open for giving a helping hoof.