Pre-readers wanted · 11:50pm Oct 19th, 2013
Well actually, since it's for a story that's already published, would that technically make them post-readers? Regardless, I'm aiming to submit one of my stories, The World Famous Flim Flam Brothers' Spectacular Travelling Menagerie, to Equestria Daily, but not until I've polished it. Like a lot. Grammar, I've got covered, but what I could use are some objective opinions regarding content. "Does this seem like something Spike would say?", "Is the pacing halfway decent?", "Is this the worst fan fiction that's ever been published?", stuff like that. I've been rejected by them a few times now (for other stories, this will be the first time I'm submitting Menagerie), so I think I've got an understanding of the pitfalls my writing style tends to fall into, areas upon which I need to improve and whatnot, but outside opinions always help. Formal or informal, whatever you've got the time and/or willingness to do, if you've got a second or two to toss some feedback my way, I'm all ears and grateful for the help!
Sorry for the late reply. I could totally review your story and check for anything that may need revising. Just PM or email me your GDoc link with commenting enabled and I'll take a look at it.
Thanks! I'll probably have to make it into a GDoc first in order for that to work
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No prob. Just let me know when that's up and running.
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Will do. Giving each chapter a once-over first, then I'm going to put them on Google Doc. Thank you again!
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Sounds good. And you're welcome!