The Life of Vinyl Scratch : editing diary · 11:15pm Apr 14th, 2012
ok ok i know that now this story at the moment is real shabby and needs loads of work doing to it to get it finely tuned. the stuff that is up there is a draft, if you enjoy it then thanks, realy thanks it meens a lot to me. i have already befriended a fellow fanfic writer who loyally nudges me every day; thank you DJ grump for making me stop listening to music and sit down to write for a bit.
i have decided to keep a diary of where i have edited to on the stuff that is up there so you can kind of see where im at.
i hope that if i persevere with this one day i will be able to convey my vision to you in words, i have so many ideas and i have huge plans for where this story is going, i just need to write it right.
so yea i'v been talking things over and we have decided that work on details is important, i'm expanding bits where i descibe rooms, charachters and like suroundings and stuff.
and i'm starting to edit in bits where i stimulate the sences of the readers.
and i got this reeeaaaaly old book called "the dictionar of english synonyms" guys this book is freekin awsome. i literally take it everywhere with me and am reading it constantly, my friends are starting to get annoyed as when they say a word i will but in and sugest an alternatine (more awsome ) word they could use.
ok i have loads of random sentences i made up in my head and im starting to incorporate them into a draft kinda thing
on another note i have edited up to the bit where cheerilee arives at the playground
ok last night i got loads of work done on chapter one, i managed to explain setings in more detail and i have clarified a few things that required some work
i even added a little flash-back which is a first for me but i think it went alright. this story is turning into a whole bunch of 'firsts for me' so why not have another.
chapter one has now been edited up to the part where the other teachers apear in the staff room.
sorry i didn't get to post my latest developments when i actually did them, mom is pissed of with my constant brony-ing and it all kicked off again
hey there guys, it's me again. just to say i'v done some work on developing the intro's with the other teachers and i have finished editing through chapter one. i think it should be considerably better than it was to beguin with, although you are welcome to disagree.
i have posted the edited version onto the origional story so it should be where the draft one was before. the title of the first chapter being 'chapter one : foundling
hope you enjoy
work starts now on editing chapter 2 and thinking about what stuff is gonna go down in chapter 3.
i'm just waiting for my wonderful editor to read though my draft of chapter 2 and then i'll get to work on some solid writing. thank you again DJ grump, your such a big help and a true bro
i know it looks like i have doe el zilcho recently but bear with me, i have chapter 4 mostly done and i'm taking a lot more care and concentration in my work (ie: trying to not just slap words at the screen and hope they make a cohesive sentence)
also i have made a draft of all the scenes up to around chapter 7 and have been gradually adding to them all
also also, i was away with no internet for the last week so couldn't do much. but while i was away i came up with some awesome ideas for unrelated short stories.
rest assured i'm still working on this main story and i have not forgotten it
and the more observant of you will have noticed that the whole gender reverse thing is irrelevant as i changed Vinyl back to being a filly (how she should be)
i actualy can't bare it any more, i look at the first 3 chapters of the life of vinyl scratch and go 'da fuq, i can do much better that that'. yea i gues that hapens with ur first story. so i'm re-writing it, the main story line will be the same so nothings gonna get spoiled. it's just going to be writen better
like not like an amature 