Permanent vacation

I am officially out of time/interest/whatever to handle this story now. I started this story because I wanted something to do for a while and I got it. Unfortunately, I'm going to just have to cut this story short. I simply do not have the time anymore to handle this anymore.

I will have 6 up, but until this story interests me and I can find time away from doing actual music and writing for my job, this story will remain as it is, unfinished.

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[whitemew]

Its normal to take a break, most authors unless inspired write around a chapter each 3 weeks - 1 month, im still yet to read thre last chapter, been busy with other stuff but I did read 5 and I would like to adress several things with the story, if thats ok with you...:

-Sometimes the characters feel undeveloped in what they're doing, for example when Pinky and Rarity had their fight at their house it felt ok, have their arguments and outcome but when celestia came later and they exposed their points it felt rushed, they talk but it doesnt explain what they're feeling exactly and pinky came to terms in a really easy way, didnt feel the characters struggle to get convinced.

-The story feels rushed on some parts like a lot like when rainbow dash comes back at the end of chapter 5, you setup something of an argument before that but was suddently resolved without any interaction really, again I havent read chap 6 but the point is the story feels like it changes pace and felts like the style suddently changes.

Hope this can help somehow, ill suggest looking for a proof reader, I wish I had the experience to help more with this.

On side note on my profile im adding your story among others I like..And with a lil review, so hopefuly more people will check on it.