Chapter 4 delay and future problems

First off I must apologize for the massive delay in the release of chapter 4. Originally it was going to connect all the main characters but instead I focused on Soot and made the chapter a reasonable size while setting up the meeting. I actually had the chapter written before school started 8 weeks ago. I unfortunately did not have time to edit it or get my friend to edit it. As a result this chapter is a bit under edited so feedback would be great. I have been insanely and unexpectedly busy so far this year so new chapters might be sparse until Christmas. I really enjoy writing this story but school comes first then friends and family so my little free time goes to football, video games and shows (Breaking Bad, Korra, Fairy Tail, cant wait for MLP season 4). On the bright side my English teacher this year will let my hand in a minimum 200 page story for our final instead of a 20 page analysis on an English Poet (thank God)! Now onto the reasons for consistent occupation. First off is school, I'm an A student......hell mostly A+ student so my senior year I had a lot of choices but we are mandated to take 7 full classes every year (crazy private school with crazy expectations). So being me I took AP civics, AP English, Anatomy, psychology and AP Physics. I actually have 4 honors classes and 3 science classes even though none of them are required (AP Physics is death I'm struggling to maintain an A). Another happy note is 5 of my classes count for college credit something new my school was approved for. On a social note I fell in love with this girl who I started talking to last year and texted constantly over summer. She was stoic but funny and absolutely brilliant and gorgeous. So we got extremely close and I was planning to ask her out with all my friends total support. Now it gets bad she apparently had a boyfriend which none of her best friends ever expected and she never told anyone until she casually told me to let me down. She had been slowly trying to let me down but kept apologizing for not talking as much so I blew it off. Basically it was a totally unexpected and beyond heartbreaking experience. Now we hardly talk and it can be awkward (she purposely talks to my friends around me which she never did). Oh and instead of talking to me about it she ranted to my friend about how she never knew I liked her and she never liked me and all our day long talks meant nothing (yeah bs). The worst part is that I really am in love with her and I still am. Homecoming week with relaxed dress code didn't help as she was dressed so attractively and for coronation her dress and her were absolutely stunning. My friends were gapping, it was that bad how amazing she looked. So now with all my school stress I still have to deal with heartbreak. In school I've had several weeks with between 9-13 test and quizzes and I've had to study and retake the ACT since I was let down with my score. Now I'm filling out college applications and scholarships for UNM, ASU and Chicago (which requires a lot) and now end of the week projects are flooding in. So yeah no real time to write and edit and what time I do have is spent on GTA, with family and friends and watching those glorious shows. So I'm sorry to all that care about my inactivity but it's justified and I will try harder to make new content.