Uh... Yeah: Story Changes · 10:07pm Sep 26th, 2013
You remember my story False Memory right?... Actually you probably don't. I wrote it, intending for it to be the official version of Believing Stories... and I basically wrote Believing Stories and made a few noticeable, but honestly insignificant, changes.
Um... about that.
I wasn't intending on going back and rewriting the original and being happy with it. But I did so that and now I have False memory which is... there. Same things are true with one variation in the backstory,the family died the same way, and I never explained why the hospital is partially burned at times. It's not really a different story or different enough.
For those who have already read the story (all... 20 of you?*checks* 85?hmm...) —Don't worry. I am just planning on changing the family backstory of Ashlyn (how many and why they're all dead now except for her), Ashlyn's last name, Dr. Cruebel's name... maybe Sarah's too... not sure yet and of course: the ending. *sighs* Yeah, that was something I kinda rushed and it doesn't fit at all anymore.
So yeah... yet another story I'm rewriting. What can I say? Things change and inspiration is schizophrenic.
Oh, also working on Cover Art and I will try to get this next chapter for Notes finished. So far here are the suggested scenes that will be revisited from Discord's POV:
1. When Discord takes the baseball from Celeste.
2. When Celeste's stomach is on fire and Discord seems to suddenly appear in her room.
3. When Discord retrieves Celeste from the padded room and doesn't react to Sombra's presence or taunts.
4. When Discord discovers Celeste looking through a family album and freaks.
5. Towards the end when Sombra and Discord fight over Sarah.
Any other scenes?
Personally, I liked it how it was, even though it was confusing sometimes.
Mainly because of the bars thing, but yeah.
I may or may not go back to read it again though. :3