Chapter 4 off to editing ye shall go!

SO! Just sen chapter 4 off to editing and tbh i am quite proud of it :) and am hoping this'll be one of the chapters that even though its 3000+ words it goes by as though it's a paragraph since ya dont wanna stop :D, perhaps not but still IMO its and awesome chapter and i had quite an awesome time writing it, you might even say it was 20% cooler to write...