Critique Requested · 8:39pm Sep 12th, 2013
So, after many months of stalling Power Through Deceit, I've decided to finish it up once and for all!
However, I've got another story in progress. (SPOILER ALERT: It's a SMITE crossover)
But before I continue working on said future story, I'd like somebody to give the intro chapter a read through, and offer any advice for what needs fixing. PM me if you are hoping to critique this intro.
But for now, I'm gonna finish Power through Deceit.