Thanks you - plus updates on story

hay there guys i have to just say thank you so much for the feedback i got from my new story with 27 up votes and 222 views THANK YOU !!, i have to say i now feel really excited but really scared that i don't mess it up for you guys

- typo problem-

i have noticed that there are typo's in my first chapter and i have had some people to help me out on this but i have not yet had someone proofread the story and it will be sometime later today before someone does. (17/8)

-plot-
i have had great feedback on the plot and i thank you guys for it. (another shout out to great British geek who helped with the plot to the first chapter)
i have already got the second chapter complete and i was going to post it this morning but with the feedback on typo's i really want to make sure that you guys are ok with it before i post it so if anyone wants to proofread/ edit this new chapter that would be great

-again thanks-
seriously from what started out as a simple question on a group discussion i have come to write my first popular fic and i have all you great people to thank for this, i have to say the pressure is mounting on making a good fic for you guys and if you have any idea's i'd love to hear them

again thanks for reading my jumbled up mess i call a story and i should have the next chapter up sometime today (edited or not)

Comments

[Enderstorm]

i really do think you need a proofreader :P

[Blueball-Blitz]

1290611 i only have great British geek at the moment , going to need him to do it sometime later today on the latest chapter

[Blueball-Blitz]

1290611 but still i would say i've just created my first hit story !- and i'm sure your cover art helped out a lot

[Enderstorm]

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