OK, ok, ok, ok.

So, I think what I was doing wrong was that I was writing chapters too long. I need to tone it down to like, 300 words. Then I should be able to get this thing worked on. So when I finish this, I will have a bit more experience in FIMfic and can take another stab at this. I'm going to try to do this crap and do it right.

Comments

[mapu]

300 words is really short. Anyhow good luck.