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Updates on Sharing kindness · 2:53pm Aug 12th, 2013
Well i've got an editor, <Anonymous>, and he's been kindly helping me editing chapter one this last days.
So, presenting again, now in proper english :D, chapter one. Not many changes story wise, but still some details were added, so if you want you can give it a look and tell us what you think :P
Chapter two is still on development, i've been organizing my ideas and everything on paper, so now that chapter one is finished, i'll start writing it from where i left months ago, so expect it in some weeks.
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