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One More Brony


Kind of new here just looking to write some kick a stories that people will enjoy. Looking forward to writing and hoping to have fun.

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  • 559 weeks
    Blog Number 3 Huzzah!!

    Bonjour Bonjour poneys du parti!! Today I have not one, not two, but three followers to commemorate :O Hydra, LunarGuard12, and my own brother Fictional Critic. You all are

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  • 559 weeks
    Blog Number 2 Yay!!

    Hey Hey everypony, I wanted to say hi to my new follower Super_Big_Mac. Hey Super, you're awesome :D Following that wonderful news I'd like to commemorate my latest follows allllll 107 of them Weeeeeee, let's get started (;

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  • 559 weeks
    Blog Number 1 Woooh!!

    Hey everypony, I am soo excited to be writing to you all right now. I even found this one guy earlier that gave me a huge headstart on everything. He goes by Fictional Critic, and his favorites list is just full of great stories. Admittedly I've been lurking in his favorite bin for a few months before actually doing anything : / sorry.

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Aug
6th
2013

Blog Number 1 Woooh!! · 5:40am Aug 6th, 2013

Hey everypony, I am soo excited to be writing to you all right now. I even found this one guy earlier that gave me a huge headstart on everything. He goes by Fictional Critic, and his favorites list is just full of great stories. Admittedly I've been lurking in his favorite bin for a few months before actually doing anything : / sorry.

I'd love to hear from all of you out there in Equestria, just drop me a comment or shoot me a message and I'll get back to you A.S.A.P. ; ) I'm just sooo excited right now I feel like dancing, you all are awesome and I want to talk with each and every one of you :D.

Okay that's all for now, later everyone I'll talk with you all soon ( :

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Comments ( 7 )

Oooohh.... What'cha gonna write about?

1267986
I haven't the slightest idea :derpytongue2:

1268884 :rainbowlaugh: Mayhaps you should write about a Changeling who winds up befriending the Mane Six, because he can't turn into a pony, and his pony-wife is scared that he might be taken away and tortured!

Or maybe something more along the lines of the Mane 6 going off on a grand adventure, searching the seas for the treasure that would make their dreams come true!

Or maybe just write an HiE that doesn't suck, eh? :rainbowwild:

1268998
Um.. :unsuresweetie: I'm not quite sure if any of those things would make for a good story.
:ajsleepy: I don't know where to start :applecry:

1269059 Start by brainstorming, or just letting fly a random idea. Storyboard it, make an infrastructure, the basic outline of a story*. After that, you just need to add dialogue, action scenes (where within action scenes can be anything from fighting against a horde of zombie ninjas to a father playing with his children as the mom makes dinner.), and some drama, because a story is no good without drama and suspense!






*At the start, we have X and Y talking as they're hiding from B. B finds them, chases them, Y is captured, X has to save Y. Near the middle of the fic, X and B have fought a few times, each time B managing to escape. X finally kills/defeats B, but Y is still nowhere to be found. X continues his search. And at the end, X finally finds Y, but Y is scared of X, because X has done many terrible things, and has changed into something different than the sweet, caring person he was at the beginning, and instead of wanting to save Y because of love, it's more of an obsession. "I'll keep you safe, my dear! By locking you up in my new mansion, just like the guys I've been fighting had done, but this time it's out of love! Bwahahahaha!" Then, sequel hook~!

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:pinkiehappy: Thanks for the help.
I'm going to try talking to my brother to see if he has any suggestions :twilightblush:

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