An Unlikely Villain: From Fluttershy to Brevity Thrash and Back Again review

stories that feture fluttershy as a villan are somthing i rarely come across let along one that has her as an alicorn as the name shows our little fluttershy becomes her nightmare form "Brevity Thrash" someone who dose not like getting pudhed around it remineds me a lot of an episode but i cant put a name to it right now (maybe the one with iron will) but it shows great use of charaters and some well placed vilonce the reforming twist seemed to fall into my "this would be better if it was a chapter longer to develope this seen" area but thats a nit pick

i would say its a good read

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