New story from junebud: The Magic of Immortality · 8:16pm Jul 12th, 2013
Okay, I've taken another plunge into another style of FimFic. HiE. It's called The Magic of Immortality and it's about a semi-adult named Jeremy who discovers he's immortal and has to figure out how to spend all that time. Okay, before you all decide to unfollow in droves, I'm still working on The Apple Tree, but this story is something of a personal challenge for me. Why? Because I really like the idea of Human in Equestria, but I don't think it gets executed very well. This story is my attempt to give HiE a booster shot. I imagine that it'll get its fair share of automatic downvotes because the action in Equestria doesn't even get started in the first two chapters. That won't happen until chapter 3. That and the fact that it's a HiE story. We'll see.
As always, your comments are welcome as are your critiques! Please let me know how I can improve!
Welp I read only HiE fic of yours and I'm interested in this piece of writing. With no restriction for immortalls you can do quite many things in this story. Jeremy can actually take Equestria and other kingdoms of this world on completly another level.
Featured already? You're making quite a name for yourself here. Nicely done.
Oh, and while I'm not a fan of HiEs per se, this one looks somewhat different. Hmm... I think it'll go on my Read Later list.
Maybe, maybe, maybe we could have TwiDash in here? Maybe just acknowledge the pairing?
But, I haven't even read the first chapter, so maybe that goes against your plans.
And now I'm babbling. I wish you luck with both stories and the difficulty of juggling them!