Longma change.. · 11:15pm Jul 2nd, 2013
hey, I've decided I kind of want to go in a different direction with Longma, I know a lot of people favorited and liked this story mostly for the potential, but the way I wanted to go about it turned out... well, let's just say that you got the gist of the history in the second chapter. But in the new direction was something I was already setting up, Twilight becoming the Princess of the Longma. I've recently watched the Equestria Girls movie (It's great, it really is, I was surprised at how easily I got used to them being humans) but a point was brought up that when the Crystal Empire came into existence Celestia gave it to Cadence to rule. And Twilight was worried in the movie that Celestia might give Twilight her own empire as well, and that she might not be ready for it.
Well, that's where this is going *spoiler* Twilight's going to become the Princess of the Longma and Shadhavar (Sombra's race), and she'll have to get used to the new culture and situation by simply being there and trying her best, inspired by Cadence and Shining Armor's impressive display of acceptance to their new Empire in this story: "http://www.fimfiction.net/story/68222/nyxs-family" In Nyx's Family they build the culture and society in the Crystal Empire very well, and they show the troubles two Equestrians have when they have to get used to a new culture and learn about the history of a new Empire.
Twilight will have to go through something similar. Living in a world of crystal and darkness, with ponies with sharp teeth and draconic eyes, ones who worshipped Nightmare Moon like she worshipped Celestia as a filly. I just wanted to let all the fans of the series know before I change the description, the characters, and maybe even a rewrite.
