Jun
27th
2013
New story idea [The Soul of the Demon · 10:26pm Jun 27th, 2013
In this idea AppleBloom finds a black stone in the everfree forest, but she doesn;t know that by touching it, the soul of an ancient demon Celestia sealed inside the stone is now inside her body. Applejack and her Friends must purge the demon with the Elements of Harmony before the ritual that Sacrifices AppleBlooms body to bring back his body is Complete
Quote Spoiler [This is when Applejack contronts Applebloom [Demon speaking through her]
Applejack: Let go of mah Sister ya Varment
AppleBloom [P]: Heh heh..Wretched mare. Are you listening, Applebloom. Is this truly the mare who is your older sister? Then I will use your hooves to tear her limb from limb!
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*GASP*
Sounds interesting and conflicting.
Also sounds like a good read. I would read it if you wrote it!
1172676 Evil and Dark eh?
Also when Applebloom is in control she speaks normally [But when the demon is using her as a puppet all her Words are Bolded
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What can I say? Grim/dark/evil stories pique my interest.
Sounds like a good way to distinguish speech.
Do EET?
1172687 I'm planning to also I have a few more of the demon says when in control
When somepony who is not the CMC or Mane 6 confronts Applebloom
AppleBloom: Do you challenge me? You Ponies are so incredibly stupid. You've forgotten what it is to fear me.
Confronted by Sweetie Belle or Scootaloo
Scootaloo/Sweetie Belle: Let's Our Friend go
AppleBloom: Save me!
Scoots/sweets: Good your still there
AppleBloom: No, you moronic Filly I am still in control. Heh heh...What a splendid fool you make. Shall I dress you in a jester's cap? Shall we watch you jape in my demon's court? Applebloom will be dead soon, I will be reborn SOOON Can you not understand?
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Kinda looks rusty...
I could do some work for you if you like?
I got time.
1172731 Sure I could use the help
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PM me with teh details if you like
1173316 Okay I will