Teaser from the first draft of the third chapter of Fallout: Equestria, Hivemind · 6:36am Jun 14th, 2013
“... are Hero”
“No No No! Try again”, Misty’s voice cracked as she tried to teach her companion
“We.... is Hero?”, the changelings voice buzzed as she struggled with what Misty was teaching her.
“Gah!” there was the distinctive sound of hoof meeting face.
The two continued down the pathway as Misty struggled to explain the intracies of single person pronouns.
“Lets try this”, Misty sugested as they continued walking down the path. “Repeat after me”.
“I” Misty said with emphasis.
“I” Hero repeated with equal emphasis.
“Am”
“Am”
“Hero”
“Hero”, The changeling felt a sense of pride with repeating everything correctly.
“So, Who are you” Misty asked
“We are Hero”
Sometimes a facehoof just isn't enough. Misty pounded her head on the ground.
Bemused Hero watched this strange ritual, but being a good student, she copied Misty’s example.
I like what you've done here, Since Hero is a changeling drone I assume there are no I's for her because the queen is the only individual in a hive.
I was giggling like mad by the end of the teaser. Great dialog!
Well I'm sold. I need this new chapter in my life.