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CoffeeRings


A reader... I read.. I love to read I also am Derpish. I have Derp and I am proud of being Derpy I also work on Blood Bound a non FIM webcomic thats NSFW and not

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  • 343 weeks
    Uptate time!

    I have been writing its not dead~! I am considering putting what I am witing onto the chapter I have released.... or as a new chapter. Not sure yet. If I do. I will delete the last chapter and re-release it.
    if not new chapter.

    Oh and yes Quote time.

    POWER ARMOR DETECTED. STAND BY FOR CONNECTION AND AUTHORISATION.

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  • 354 weeks
    Working on it still

    Iam working on the story infact here for your pleasure is RAW unedited typing with all the spelling grammer and punctuation errors that my poor editors have to go though (not realy I do get most of them in re-writes)

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  • 360 weeks
    Update!!!

    Im still working on the chapter! I promice! Its been tricky for me to write with both home life, work life, and subject. But I am getting though it! I PROMISE!


    anyway have a snippit (with all spelling grammar and other errors intact!) (after the break for gore reasons)

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  • 371 weeks
    Rating change

    I have decided to change the rating for Hivemind from Teen to Mature. I have tried to keep the story somewhat sanitized to keep to the Teen rating but this story is not something I should do that too. Its not a pleasant place, and these characters are deeper than what the teen rating has put. I also put the sex tag on, not because I plan to have clop (I don't) but because there will be

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  • 396 weeks
    It is coming I promice

    This chapter has been taking FOREVER With parenting and working and not being able to write down things the way I see it in my head.... Its annoying. Esp since I have other chapters in my head I want to get onto!

    But I promise the next chapter IS underway.....

    Sneek Peek?

    OK

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Jun
14th
2013

Teaser from the first draft of the third chapter of Fallout: Equestria, Hivemind · 6:36am Jun 14th, 2013

“... are Hero”

“No No No! Try again”, Misty’s voice cracked as she tried to teach her companion

“We.... is Hero?”, the changelings voice buzzed as she struggled with what Misty was teaching her.

“Gah!” there was the distinctive sound of hoof meeting face.

The two continued down the pathway as Misty struggled to explain the intracies of single person pronouns.

“Lets try this”, Misty sugested as they continued walking down the path. “Repeat after me”.

“I” Misty said with emphasis.

“I” Hero repeated with equal emphasis.

“Am”

“Am”

“Hero”

“Hero”, The changeling felt a sense of pride with repeating everything correctly.

“So, Who are you” Misty asked

“We are Hero”

Sometimes a facehoof just isn't enough. Misty pounded her head on the ground.
Bemused Hero watched this strange ritual, but being a good student, she copied Misty’s example.

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Comments ( 3 )

I like what you've done here, Since Hero is a changeling drone I assume there are no I's for her because the queen is the only individual in a hive.

I was giggling like mad by the end of the teaser. Great dialog!

Well I'm sold. I need this new chapter in my life.

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