Looking for editors. · 10:22pm Jun 13th, 2013
Hello everypony! I know I'm not popular on this site, but I'm hoping someone will read this and lead a hand. See, I have another horror story on another site, but I don't want to post it here until someone edits it: Awhile ago I wrote the first chapter to a fanfic called, "Apple Cakes." It's another unoffical squeal to the infamous fanfic Cupcakes, but this one focuses on Applebloom's side of the story. Ever since I read Cupcakes I couldn't help but think, "why was Applebloom there? Surely she has a reason" and that's what I'm hoping my fanfic will answer.
The only problem I have--besides obvious grammer mistakes--is their accents. I was born and raised in a country city, but I never heard the country accents that we had, and now thanks to talking to people without an accent, I don't have it as much. So, I need someone to edit their dialog and see if I captured the Apple family's accent. Now most of you are probably saying, "you can go without it," but I can't. I wish I could just write like I would normally, but the accents are a major point in the story. I don't know where to put "Ah" instead of "I" and things like that.
So, could someone(s) please help me?
